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Soft Showers

tears of heaven gently fall caressing my soul sizzling fire wards off the chill too lazy to rise and shine sun hides behind dingy clouds dripping leaves flutter steady showers soak moist cheeks of earth ask for more ribbit ribbit rap delight
7.5.7 7.7.5 5.7.7 12th December 2022 For Charles Messina's "Triple New Charlieku" contest

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Date: 1/5/2023 10:12:00 AM
This is So delightful, Jo. Congrats on the winner list
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Date: 1/5/2023 7:09:00 AM
So well done, Jo. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
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Date: 1/5/2023 5:04:00 AM
As it's duly noted, Jo, a cute encore, and with my compliments on your win, Aloha William
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Date: 1/4/2023 9:44:00 PM
"ribbit ribbit rap delight" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2023 8:18:00 PM
Lovely write, Jo. Love the last line (lol). Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie :)
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Date: 12/25/2022 3:28:00 PM
Charming, Jo ~ Happy holidays to you and your loved ones ~
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Date: 12/19/2022 3:50:00 PM
I love the rain Jo, and this is so calm and peaceful. A relaxing word picture :)
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Date: 12/12/2022 7:22:00 AM
- The rain pours down most of the year ... not loved :))) - A beautiful haiku, Jo :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 12/12/2022 1:27:00 AM
Love the imagery in your haiku Jo, I always welcome the rain. Makes things grow and cleans the landscape. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 12/11/2022 10:15:00 PM
Your beautiful poem is a reminder of why some people love the rain, Jo. :)
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