Soft Pit a Patter

The spring rain
Stirs my senses_my gain
Soft pit-a-patter music_wind chimes

Brings to my mind poems, lines, and rhymes
Saturated these times
By scents_sounds

The soft tender fig leaves release their scent in rounds
Air clean wisteria wafts as birds sings__heart bounds

(Trois Par Huit but not on the list..Will enter under rhyme.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 1:46 AM
very nice peace my friend
Loving Iii Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 4:39 PM
your gonna hear pit a patter allright but it aint the comming of spring. jhl
Galua Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 2:05 AM
love to think of it Sara,,,rains are indeed a great source of inspiration...^_^ v
Neels Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 11:16 PM
There is a tranquility about this piece of yours Sara. Hope you are having peaceful weekend ;) Wilma
Dufresne Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 6:59 PM
looks as though you've accomplished La trois par huit in fine fashion, Sara with this uplifting poem
Stella Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 5:48 AM
this one looks tough to do I still have to get mine in loved yours tho and loved the imagery so keep on trucking my friend also thanks for your kind comment on my stuff hugs and blessings
Henderson Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 11:03 PM
Very nice, Sara. I enjoyed reading this morning.
Johnson Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:37 PM
I think he says you are supposed to enter this as tanka if you check the contest rules. Thanks Sara for bringing my attention to my slipping lines. How ever that was not a contest just a challenge to post a halloween poem every day. I haven't done it every day though, I have been busy with guests. I tried the period and it didn't work so I'm not going to worry about it for now. Thanks. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Ahhh, how sweet this is. It seems like so full of senses Is it for Frank's contest?
Buggs Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Beautiful poem.I am seeing the graceful image in my mind.Great write my friend.Love,jamecia
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October 15, 2010 at 1:50 PM
My dear Sara, every write that spill from your pen makes me smile, and that my dear is a gift...thank you...love Michael
Ahmad Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 12:44 PM
nice one... enjoyed :)
D. Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 11:13 AM
lovely and soft, enjoyed' luv n.d
Walsh Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Love this Sarah - a magical piece - great imagery - you're great! Liz
Devonshire Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Excellent entry, Sara! You make the reader feel like they just took a walk through a lovely garden in the rain. Very nice touch with the wind chmes, too. Best wishes for the contest. Love, carolyn
Richards Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 8:20 AM
a bit of loveliness this morning!! Wonderful and sweet poem! :) Nice, Sara!
Murphy Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 6:15 AM
very very nice loved it well done the best of luck to you in the contest have a great weekend and thanks for your kind comments and support faleshia
Mehta Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:49 AM
A very enjoyable write quite lyrical, sara
Bagnall Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:23 AM
What a pleasant vision that brings to mind, enjoyed readin tyour poem today
Coulstock Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 4:17 AM
Hi Sara Lovely soft lilting rhythm.I like this gentle uncomplicated poem that 'stirs my senses' Good luck with the contest and thank you for your kind comments.Isn't it wonderful to be able to share a gift that not only gives you enjoyment but can bring pleasure to others.I feel priviledged to be among so many talented poets at Soup. luv June(Sylvia)
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