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Soft Pink, White and Brown

soft pink, white and brown
colours of my wife’s old coat
she looked a real treat

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/7/2011 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/7/2011 2:10:00 AM

Congrats to u, Jack. I just want to know what your wife tho't about this winning piece? I mean, hey, if she didn't look so great in her coat, what would u have written about.....ice cream or something? ha ha. Take Care.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 12:45:00 AM

Congrats Jack on a top ten win with this yummy treat my friend.. and analogy too..luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/6/2011 10:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Jack! Love, Annalise

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/6/2011 10:38:00 PM

Ah, so well done. Congratulations on your win. This is just great. Lee

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/6/2011 8:24:00 PM

Cute :) Congratulations on your win!!! Well-deserved!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2011 4:22:00 PM

I'm so glad to see this one won. Congratulations.

Cory Long

Date: 10/6/2011 3:36:00 PM

congrats on your in in Pds contest.. free spirit

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2011 2:20:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..It must have won in the contest...Congrats..I liked the sense of humor in it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2011 1:28:00 PM

Your sense of humor won you a high place, Jack. Congats! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2011 11:51:00 AM

DEAR JACK.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/3/2011 4:51:00 PM

What a sweet thought. I am sure she would love to hear you say so. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2011 1:42:00 AM

returning to this one. I sure do like it a lot!! About my cereal poem, gosh, I don't even eat cereal. I have no time for breakfast so I only grab juice or protein bar as I rush out the door each morning. but if I DID eat cereal, I would choose grape nuts or raisin bran. So I KNOW you must have ONE that you would eat if you could! Write it!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/1/2011 10:42:00 PM

Yowza....what a nice wife haiku.....fun stuff here, Jack. As always, Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2011 3:44:00 PM

Ah, the Neopolitan coat! Delicious poem, Jack. I think this should be a senryu contest as opposed to a haiku which are usually about nature. I was thinking about writing about a cow. LOL Best wishes in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 9/30/2011 3:15:00 PM

Very nice jack!Good luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2011 12:23:00 AM

This is so simple, but something about it is so endearing and precious. I love it.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/30/2011 12:04:00 AM

You have made an unique poem using the given theme. This poem is a very awesome write! You took the challenge and went ahead and found a special way to write this poem!! Incredible words!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/29/2011 7:18:00 PM

lovely colors and flavor to this Haiku Jack.. good luck in the contest... creative my friend..luv..

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