Soft Pillows

Soft pillows
Warm glows
Snuggling,cuddling
Hearts huddling

Caressing, pressing
Bodies meshing
Passion seeking
Desires peaking

Hearts beating
Kisses fleeting
Burning skin 
Fire within

Longing gaze
In a haze
Soft pillows
Love flows

Softest sigh
Forever lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/23/2010 4:52:00 PM
I got a different take on"pillows" than Derrick did. Lovely, passionate piece. Barbara
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:55:00 PM
Wonderfully passionate and full of classic romance, my friend. So few words, but such a powerful impact this poem has on the reader. Well done, Daniel! Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:43:00 PM
Enjoyed this poetry.. got me ready to buy some more pillows you know, love the flow here about something so simple as pillows. Have a great weekend. :)
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Date: 1/23/2010 11:59:00 AM
Sweetly romantic with a charismatic flair of words... gentle and loving .. like u I suppose... wonderful write Daniel... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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