Soft Pillows

Soft pillows
Warm glows
Snuggling,cuddling
Hearts huddling

Caressing, pressing
Bodies meshing
Passion seeking
Desires peaking

Hearts beating
Kisses fleeting
Burning skin 
Fire within

Longing gaze
In a haze
Soft pillows
Love flows

Softest sigh
Forever lie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gorelick Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 4:52 PM
I got a different take on"pillows" than Derrick did. Lovely, passionate piece. Barbara
Devonshire Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Wonderfully passionate and full of classic romance, my friend. So few words, but such a powerful impact this poem has on the reader. Well done, Daniel! Love, carolyn
Burton Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 2:43 PM
Enjoyed this poetry.. got me ready to buy some more pillows you know, love the flow here about something so simple as pillows. Have a great weekend. :)
Sweetheart Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Sweetly romantic with a charismatic flair of words... gentle and loving .. like u I suppose... wonderful write Daniel... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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