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Soft Night

In the

softness of night,

eyes fold to end hours’ toil

as moon cuddles new longings, etched

on dreams.



Contest: Sara Kendrick’s Cinquain
6/10/2015
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Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/14/2015 4:41:00 PM exquisite Nette gl in contest hugs Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/14/2015 1:55:00 PM Just beautiful Nette!Loved it! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/12/2015 3:41:00 PM Thank you for your participation in my contest.Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/12/2015 8:33:00 AM What great words to go along with this spectacular picture! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/12/2015 12:40:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this outstanding poem. It is beautiful! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/11/2015 11:58:00 PM Congratulations, Nette. I enjoy seeing yours again. Love that "etched on dreams!" Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 6/11/2015 11:27:00 PM Gentle and yet surreal Nette..Nicely penned.. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 6/11/2015 5:15:00 PM Congratulations on your win Nette, hugs dear friend Eve Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 6/11/2015 3:51:00 PM Nette, Congratulations........ SKAT Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/11/2015 2:09:00 PM Nette, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA" Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/11/2015 10:04:00 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/11/2015 9:20:00 AM A cuddler's moon! great fresh metaphor! Light & Love Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/11/2015 2:15:00 AM Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 6/10/2015 9:47:00 PM Nette, this is such a lovely image! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Judy Konos Date: 6/10/2015 9:28:00 PM Congratulations very lovely.... Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 6/10/2015 9:27:00 PM Fantastic write to end this long hot day dear poet ! Maybe I'll stay awake a lil' longer to fight the folding eyne ! Have a blessed week Nette.........much love, james Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/10/2015 8:08:00 PM Nette, so beautifully flowing and perfect for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, apply within Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 6/10/2015 7:01:00 PM Beautifully done, Nette. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 6/10/2015 6:22:00 PM Beautiful write ..Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 6/10/2015 11:04:00 AM Gentle and tender images. Perfection! Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 6/10/2015 8:29:00 AM Lovely poem and set out nice, Thanks for your kind comments, I have changed jobs recently so have more time to write and come on soup. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/10/2015 6:02:00 AM - Beautiful image, softness of night Nette - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Norma Arana Date: 6/10/2015 5:02:00 AM Heavenly poem ! What more can I say when all I need now is to moon gaze and sip light wine before I shut my eyes. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2015 1:22:00 AM so so gentle and beautiful imagery - the imagery of the moon cuddling - wow simply divine! I am sure this will do so well in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 Login to Reply

Manny Paras Date: 6/9/2015 11:57:00 PM Each night closes with a sigh. I got carried away by the soft glory of this poem--like a prayer! Login to Reply

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