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Soft Night

In the softness of night, eyes fold to end hours’ toil as moon cuddles new longings, etched on dreams. Contest: Sara Kendrick’s Cinquain 6/10/2015 nette onclaud
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Hamilton Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 4:41 PM
exquisite Nette gl in contest hugs
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Just beautiful Nette!Loved it!
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Thank you for your participation in my contest.Congrats on your win..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 8:33 AM
What great words to go along with this spectacular picture!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Congratulations on your win with this outstanding poem. It is beautiful!
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:58 PM
Congratulations, Nette. I enjoy seeing yours again. Love that "etched on dreams!"
Carroll Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:27 PM
Gentle and yet surreal Nette..Nicely penned..
Roper Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations on your win Nette, hugs dear friend Eve
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Nette, Congratulations........ SKAT
A   Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA"
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs jan xx
Guzzi Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 9:20 AM
A cuddler's moon! great fresh metaphor! Light & Love
Sathasivam Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. Congrats on your win.
Merryman Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Nette, this is such a lovely image! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Konos Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Congratulations very lovely....
Peranteau Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Fantastic write to end this long hot day dear poet ! Maybe I'll stay awake a lil' longer to fight the folding eyne ! Have a blessed week Nette.........much love, james
La France Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Nette, so beautifully flowing and perfect for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, apply within
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 7:01 PM
Beautifully done, Nette. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 6:22 PM
Beautiful write ..Congrats on your win
Sirak Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Gentle and tender images. Perfection!
Christian Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Lovely poem and set out nice, Thanks for your kind comments, I have changed jobs recently so have more time to write and come on soup.
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 6:02 AM
- Beautiful image, softness of night Nette - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Arana Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 5:02 AM
Heavenly poem ! What more can I say when all I need now is to moon gaze and sip light wine before I shut my eyes.
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 1:22 AM
so so gentle and beautiful imagery - the imagery of the moon cuddling - wow simply divine! I am sure this will do so well in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
Paras Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 11:57 PM
Each night closes with a sigh. I got carried away by the soft glory of this poem--like a prayer!
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