Soda Pop Emotions

Can’t help going insane crazy here,

Won’t hear my name is biggest fear.

If I don’t, might could explode,

Be just small part, if I unload.

Like a bottle, all shook up,

Won’t make it to, a glass or cup.

Will only pop out, a huge mess,

Then what to do, start over, I guess?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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September 29, 2026 at 6:01 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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April 16, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Belind Celayir, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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September 21, 2011 at 4:35 PM
I could picture the scene of someone with soda pop emotions...Sara
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