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Soccer Star

From the moment your foot first touched the ball
The look on your face said it all. 
This is what you were born to do.
Growing up, you would continue to play, you just knew
Soccer wouldn't be ready for you.


Year passed, and so did you, as you became a star.
The training you've had would take you far.
How far you asked? Championship Game, here you came.
With a minute left, you shot the ball hard and upset.
But luckily, Whoosh! The ball exploded into the net.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2016 12:29:00 AM
Sydney, great to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 8/6/2015 1:48:00 AM
Sydney, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/12/2015 8:52:00 PM
Thank you everyone!! All the comments are very supportive and nice!
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Date: 6/10/2015 10:15:00 PM
Hi SYDNEY.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:20:00 AM
Sydney, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2015 11:11:00 PM
ps... this poem above tells a good story, soccer seems to be a serious sport nowadays. enjoyed
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Date: 6/4/2015 11:10:00 PM
Hello, this is a great verse for a first-time poet. I would not call this free verse. Sydney, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/4/2015 7:54:00 PM
Can people give me advice? First time poet, and I want to see what people think of this! So leave a comment below!
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