Sober Desires

I’ve got sober desires 
but defective judgment
My lips are stained with wine
and it’s time to relent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Blanca Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 4:04 PM
maia, we all have judgments based on any situation. This is part of life. They are neither good nor bad just choices made based on our information at the time.
Ashley Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 4:04 PM
A meaningful and beautiful poem, Maia. Poignant yet hopeful imagery. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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