Sober Acceptance Gandg

unabashed analyzation
overturned rocks 
and constant contemplations
an effortful acceptance 
spurned out of desperation 
gathers speed now flying
taking, ticking, tocking
the past once regretted 
incomplete when forgotten
ambitious non-removal
ticking now, now tocking
can through such a fog
of dense perplexity
a life be shaken loose
can something take me
tick me, tock me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 3, 2016 at 12:44 AM
ZACHARY, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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