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Soaring Through Rainbows

"soaring through rainbows" a day with birds brings beauty all around caressing hearts and souls dancing high and low enhancing life to see forever sharing messages gliding to and fro so hold close this sight of immense beauty and peace join them in their flight knowing this journey true let you heart and soul open making their grace stand as no other miracle is there other than a new day with song playing across earth and sky quietly and softly with pride radiating light within and out soaring through rainbows SkyWatcher 07-31-23 note I know I ended with the letter s thus making this an incomplete Abecedarian format leaving out the remaining seven letters. Thank you.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/23/2023 7:44:00 AM

What a truly soft and touching poem, Lisa. I share your love for birds and often watch them as they fly away from our bird feeders, hoping they soar over the rainbow. Sara PS Birds are truly fascinating to watch.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/10/2023 7:46:00 AM

Your vivid colorful poetic imagination and inspiration is powerful - imagine if we could soar through rainbows and could interpret bird messages, maybe they can see what calamity and destruction our planet is heading towards, they are dying in multitudes as well as humans - a really cute yet awesome write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/10/2023 10:29:00 AM

Thank you ever so much Jennifer. Hi. I very much appreciate your intake and commentary. Truly. I for one always try to see the good the light the beauty and the glory. They're all there if we look and see. Thank you again. Have a wonderful night. Blessings always (smile)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2023 12:30:00 AM

your poem flows so beautifully Lisa, I LOVE the fact you stopped at S, it makes it even more unique and to be honest the more challenging letters may have stopped the flow of the lines. BRAVO for thinking outside the box, adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/8/2023 7:09:00 AM

Good Morning Jan. Hello. Thank you Thank you. Your review and commentary is most gracious and generous to which I do not take for granted. Truly. I very much appreciate your commentary and intake on stopping with the letter "S" as I thought I would diminish the entry. Have a wonderful day and week. Blessings always (smile)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/31/2023 2:28:00 PM

My! Well done, Lisa. Such a unique dance with all the beauty that surfs our lives, I admire your forthrightness in Acknowledging its incompleteness. That shows your integrity. And further,I do not not know if you myst use all. Well done…beautiful. Pangie .

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/1/2023 2:46:00 AM

Good Morning Pangie. Hi. Thank you ever so much. Truly. I do not take your visits or commentary for granted. I appreciate your intake and opinion. May I say your entries show your integrity as well. May the grace of birds be with you. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always (smile)

Tom Woody

Date: 7/31/2023 6:39:00 AM

What an interesting form, I've never tried it. And your title is quite eye catching. We can learn much from creation

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/31/2023 7:51:00 AM

Hello Tom. Good Morning. Thank you very much. Yes, the Abecedarian is an interesting and unique format. I'm sorry I didn't complete it by finishing with letters of tuvwxyz. I like exercises now and then just to keep myself from getting rusty. Thank you also for mentioning the title because I like titles. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. Take Care (smile)