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Soaring By the Sea

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ What power the ocean has o’er me; I see it, and I long to be within its sight - forever free. My spirit soars when by the sea! I linger in the frothy waves… my heart is light, my body craves the sand to run, warm sun to bathe; I regain strength - a new road paved. I take the path that leads from here - my heart fulfilled; my mind is clear. I thank Him for all He has done as nature brings me strength to run! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ posted for a friend <3

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Chris Green

Date: 10/9/2019 7:46:00 AM

There is something very magical about the ocean and the melodic waves that just seem to soothe everything. This was beautiful my friend. Must have been written for someone very special.

Hello There
Date: 10/9/2019 12:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris ~ It was written some time ago, but I posted it for Sandra, because she is so enchanted with the ocean <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/8/2019 11:09:00 AM

Light-as-air, pleasant tribute to the sea---and to you, HT. Lovely penned! Cheers, Gershon

Hello There
Date: 10/8/2019 11:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon, for bringing a big smile to my day :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/7/2019 9:43:00 PM

Amazing poetry, so positive, so much power.

Hello There
Date: 10/8/2019 1:51:00 AM

Thank you very much, harry ~ I appreciate the visit and kind feedback :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/7/2019 8:35:00 PM

Beautiful poem and I enjoyed it tremendously. I used to run :) God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina

Hello There
Date: 10/7/2019 9:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gina! I used to run, too. Hugs : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2019 7:22:00 PM

This is a wonderful one for a repost. You are very good with words and meter!

Hello There
Date: 10/7/2019 9:10:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea : ) It's my first time posting it, but it was already written ; ) I appreciate the compliment from you, especially, because your meter is always spot on!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/7/2019 3:11:00 PM

I love this! So free and so nice :)

Hello There
Date: 10/7/2019 3:17:00 PM

Thank you very much, sweet friend :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/7/2019 12:09:00 PM

I enjoyed this journey by the sea..excellent poetry, HT.

Hello There
Date: 10/7/2019 2:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vijay ~ I appreciate it :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/7/2019 11:59:00 AM

Such a wonderful cadence to this one. I have never felt strongly about the sea but you are winning me over here.

Hello There
Date: 10/7/2019 2:53:00 PM

Lol. Thank you, Caren, and thanks for the smiles :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/7/2019 11:35:00 AM

such beautiful rhythm and flow, like the ebb of the ocean itself...i love this one, a fave for me...i thought maybe i inspired you with my last poem until i saw your note at the bottom.... beautifully penned! hugs my friend

Hello There
Date: 10/7/2019 11:46:00 AM

You inspired me to post it ~ I was hoping you would enjoy it :) hugs