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Soaring Above The Clouds

Have you ever imagined the feeling Of soaring above the clouds Only the breeze between you and the earth Away from the bustling crowds With the occasional sound of the fiery blast That keeps your airship afloat An oh so peaceful, heavenly solitude As you sail this celestial boat Imagine the absolute total serenity As you take in the breathtaking view Corn fields that go on forever and ever Mountains that reach for the blue Drifting skyward on a gentle breeze Over the clouds you soar A feeling of serenity and inner peace Emanates from every pore

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Date: 2/19/2024 10:54:00 PM
Lovely rhyming, Jack. A FAV for my list, just so I can relive the experience you describe so well in this airborne poem. Happy sailing my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/20/2024 12:32:00 PM
So many thanks Bill! Also thanks for the FAV vote... much appreciated! Cheers!
Date: 2/19/2024 10:48:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, I am always looking to the sky. I see different shapes in the clouds. they always change their shapes. Reading this poem made me feel like ai was soaring in the sky. Love, /Darlene/ xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2024 1:49:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, yes clouds are very intriguing. Yes it is amxxx-ooo.azing what the mind can see. Love, /Darlene/
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/19/2024 1:39:00 PM
Yes I do. the same thing... they are very intriguing! It's amazing what the mind can see! Love Happy Jack xxx
Date: 2/19/2024 6:49:00 AM
Well done Jack I soared skyward with this poem! A balloon ride is on my bucket list. Check out my poem Fly like a bird, my helicopter rides.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/19/2024 6:58:00 AM
Great name for a"Fly Like A Bird" Helicopter Rides Club!!! Thanks Mark again for dropping by!
Date: 2/19/2024 4:57:00 AM
I've often dream about soaring above the clouds, perhaps in an air balloon or upon my own wings...the serenity and the silent drifting appeal to me. Such an uplifting and inspirational poem for today. Thank you, dear Jack!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/19/2024 5:21:00 AM
You and I speak the same language my dear Sara! Often wondered what that feeling would be like??? Amazing? Yes... xxx

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