Soaring Above The Clouds


Have you ever imagined the feeling Of soaring above the clouds Only the breeze between you and the earth Away from the bustling crowds With the occasional sound of the fiery blast That keeps your airship afloat An oh so peaceful, heavenly solitude As you sail this celestial boat Imagine the absolute total serenity As you take in the breathtaking view Corn fields that go on forever and ever Mountains that reach for the blue Drifting skyward on a gentle breeze Over the clouds you soar A feeling of serenity and inner peace Emanates from every pore
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Baker Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 10:54 PM
Lovely rhyming, Jack. A FAV for my list, just so I can relive the experience you describe so well in this airborne poem. Happy sailing my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Ellison Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 12:32 PM
So many thanks Bill! Also thanks for the FAV vote... much appreciated! Cheers!
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 10:48 AM
Hello Happy Jack, I am always looking to the sky. I see different shapes in the clouds. they always change their shapes. Reading this poem made me feel like ai was soaring in the sky. Love, /Darlene/ xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Hello Happy Jack, yes clouds are very intriguing. Yes it is amxxx-ooo.azing what the mind can see. Love, /Darlene/
Ellison Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 1:39 PM
Yes I do. the same thing... they are very intriguing! It's amazing what the mind can see! Love Happy Jack xxx
Hughes Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Well done Jack I soared skyward with this poem! A balloon ride is on my bucket list. Check out my poem Fly like a bird, my helicopter rides.
Ellison Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Great name for a"Fly Like A Bird" Helicopter Rides Club!!! Thanks Mark again for dropping by!
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