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Soaring

Have you ever imagined the feeling Of soaring above the clouds Only the breeze between you and the earth Away from the bustling crowds The occasional sound of the fiery blast That keeps your airship afloat Such a peaceful and heavenly solitude As you sail this celestial boat Imagine the absolute total serenity As you take in the breathtaking view Corn fields that go on forever and ever Mountains that reach for the blue Drifting skyward on a gentle breeze Over the clouds you soar A feeling of serenity and inner peace Emanates from every pore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/16/2017 7:37:00 AM
Uplifting pen my friend ;) xomo!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2017 8:49:00 AM
Caught it before it reached the ceiling!!! Silly man! xxx
Date: 10/16/2017 6:46:00 AM
You have to be careful in a Hot Air Balloon, you can put too much hot air into the balloon and end up going way too high, then you will end up entering space...and you won't be able to breathe, oops! I just loved the way you wrote this clever piece, it had an awesome rhythm to it! Great Work my friend!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/16/2017 6:52:00 AM
Quite difference from my usual eh!!!

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