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So Thankful For Its Concern

I conceal my tears through the cadence of the rain. No one can see or hear, except its drops on the thatch top. Its candid concern hits me hard inside 'coz it says: I wish I were blind and deaf, I never wanted to spot you cryin'.

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Date: 11/2/2020 6:30:00 PM
the imagery in the first paragraph is amazing
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Date: 11/3/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Kyler. My apologies for my late reply. Stay safe.

Book: Shattered Sighs