So Sorry

Butterfly kisses
Your love I so miss

We were once content
But now I repent

What I would give
For one final kiss

Jan Allison
21st September 2014

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David Brown

Date: 9/28/2014 4:30:00 PM

Lovely, lovely piece Jan. So much emotion in so few words. Beautiful

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2014 4:35:00 PM

Thanks so much David:-) hugs Jan xxx

Robin Davis

Date: 9/26/2014 7:25:00 AM

Jan A short but powerful write mixed with a sad kind of passion. thank you for the amazing comment on my Twos Of Love poem

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2014 8:19:00 AM

Thanks as ever Robin for your continued support:-) hugs Jan xx

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/25/2014 11:23:00 PM

very brilliant write Jan, it made me emotional really.... what can give for one final kiss, the word final makes it altogether different. god bless

Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2014 2:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for that lovely comment Malik I am so pleased you liked my short simple poem:-) hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/23/2014 2:56:00 PM

One final kiss, one final smile, one final touch. You're killing me. Brings so many emotions in me. Short but big message. Great poem Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2014 3:00:00 PM

Thanks Brenda - goodness knows where this stuff comes from I'm not one for sad romantic writes - I think its Tim's influence he's a great romantic poet:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/22/2014 12:29:00 PM

For one final Kiss? for just one final kiss, is really forever. A beautiful poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 12:30:00 PM

Thanks for a lovely comment Maurice, I do appreciate your support and friendship:-) hugs Jan xxx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/22/2014 11:13:00 AM

Jan this comes across ever so powerful,, in fact blows me away,,it is so lovely

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 11:15:00 AM

Oh thank you so much for those kind words it is just a simple poem I penned before bed last night:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/22/2014 6:37:00 AM

Jan......a beautiful poem of longing. I know the feeling. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/22/2014 5:55:00 AM

Hugs. I feel this meaning, more like for my father, I didn't know he was dying until he was gone, and all the what if I would have knowns, would I get one more hug one kiss, one more chance to say I'm sorry.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/22/2014 4:38:00 AM

The first n then the final kiss! A bliss! Great one Jan! That's what u say is the power of words!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 7:55:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/21/2014 8:27:00 PM

First kiss promises bliss Final kiss says this I will not miss In between was the good and the bad not every ending is so sad.... Sometimes is so right to just flee separate the we from the THEE. YOUR SIX SHORT LINES , ONE BIG MESSAGE.. Bravo!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 1:02:00 AM

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Robert:-) Hugs Jan xx