Audrey Haick Poet Free verse

So She Broke Your Heart

So she broke your heart and bled you
left you to drown in dark waters... 
melancholia has kept you entombed 
so long within its frozen grasp 

So she broke your heart and bled you
left you lost in a forest of disenchantment…
stripped your soul like the northern winds 
strip bare sturdy oaks

So she broke your heart and bled you
tossed to the Ninth level of Hades...
where your heart has lain in fragments  
hope appear as fallen ashes

So she broke your heart and bled you
never look back to what has been
we’re both needing resurrection 
let love now stake its claim 
~*~
9/25/13

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Jack Horne April 19, 2015 at 5:40 AM just dropping by to say Hi and reading this again, dear Audrey. Hope you are both having a wonderful weekend. Love always xxx

Jack Horne October 26, 2014 at 10:54 AM re-reading and enjoying this one, my dear friend. Hope and pray you are both well. Love always xxx

Robert Lindley May 20, 2014 at 5:05 PM I am back again to reread this one. Straight into my fav it goes! Sure describes the heartbreak I endured 14 years ago!!

Robert Lindley May 1, 2014 at 8:58 AM Sorry I can not spend the entire day reading all your works. Perhaps tonight I can read more. I saw beautiful spirit and generous talent in reading that. Bravo!

Robert Lindley April 27, 2014 at 11:27 PM This one struck me . It has pure heart and a clear insight into lost love. Fine...

Jack Horne January 12, 2014 at 4:00 PM reading this heartfelt write again, my dear Annalise. I was feeling kind of sad and wrote a sonnet for Sue today. Hope you're feeling much better - I am in general. Love always to you both xx I look forward to writing with you, my friend - any subject is fine with me if my suggestion didn't inspire you

Joe Inka November 30, 2013 at 9:36 AM Wow,your words really capture that feeling, that horrible horrible feeling of rejection, with a glimmer of hope in the end. Super poem

Dinda Minardi November 19, 2013 at 2:40 AM a very great one, Annelise :) how have u been?

Timothy Jacks November 10, 2013 at 6:06 PM They say there's nothing fair in love or war. I think we`'ve all lost a time or two. I enjoyed seeing it from a woman's view. Nice job

Mustapha Mohammed November 3, 2013 at 8:42 PM Fantastic poetry dear lady.

Karen Anglesey October 30, 2013 at 10:08 AM Annalise, This is an amazing poem. Absolutely exquisite. Hope you are well.

Jack Horne October 27, 2013 at 2:01 PM love this beautiful heartfelt write, my friend x

Harry Horsman October 19, 2013 at 11:17 AM Oh Annalise, so glad to read your poetry again,, this is wonderful...

Ravi Sathasivam October 14, 2013 at 11:11 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu October 6, 2013 at 4:39 PM Well penned my dear,love your grand style. Haven't seen you comment on people's works,are u still with us? Am really concerned,will be delighted if you kindly rePly by commenting on one of my poems. Wishing you the best. Love and hugs, Always Baron Of Ebullion.

Carrie Richards October 4, 2013 at 9:07 AM I hope that love wins over all.......overcoming all broken hearts...whoever and whatever has passed..........love will triumph :)