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So She Broke Your Heart

So she broke your heart and bled you
left you to drown in dark waters... 
melancholia has kept you entombed 
so long within its frozen grasp 

So she broke your heart and bled you
left you lost in a forest of disenchantment…
stripped your soul like the northern winds 
strip bare sturdy oaks

So she broke your heart and bled you
tossed to the Ninth level of Hades...
where your heart has lain in fragments  
hope appear as fallen ashes

So she broke your heart and bled you
never look back to what has been
we’re both needing resurrection 
let love now stake its claim 
~*~
9/25/13

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Jack Horne

Date: 4/19/2015 5:40:00 AM

just dropping by to say Hi and reading this again, dear Audrey. Hope you are both having a wonderful weekend. Love always xxx

Jack Horne

Date: 10/26/2014 10:54:00 AM

re-reading and enjoying this one, my dear friend. Hope and pray you are both well. Love always xxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/20/2014 5:05:00 PM

I am back again to reread this one. Straight into my fav it goes! Sure describes the heartbreak I endured 14 years ago!!

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/1/2014 8:58:00 AM

Sorry I can not spend the entire day reading all your works. Perhaps tonight I can read more. I saw beautiful spirit and generous talent in reading that. Bravo!

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/27/2014 11:27:00 PM

This one struck me . It has pure heart and a clear insight into lost love. Fine...

Jack Horne

Date: 1/12/2014 4:00:00 PM

reading this heartfelt write again, my dear Annalise. I was feeling kind of sad and wrote a sonnet for Sue today. Hope you're feeling much better - I am in general. Love always to you both xx I look forward to writing with you, my friend - any subject is fine with me if my suggestion didn't inspire you

Joe Inka

Date: 11/30/2013 9:36:00 AM

Wow,your words really capture that feeling, that horrible horrible feeling of rejection, with a glimmer of hope in the end. Super poem

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/19/2013 2:40:00 AM

a very great one, Annelise :) how have u been?

Timothy Jacks

Date: 11/10/2013 6:06:00 PM

They say there's nothing fair in love or war. I think we`'ve all lost a time or two. I enjoyed seeing it from a woman's view. Nice job

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 11/3/2013 8:42:00 PM

Fantastic poetry dear lady.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/30/2013 10:08:00 AM

Annalise, This is an amazing poem. Absolutely exquisite. Hope you are well.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2013 2:01:00 PM

love this beautiful heartfelt write, my friend x

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2013 11:17:00 AM

Oh Annalise, so glad to read your poetry again,, this is wonderful...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/14/2013 11:11:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/6/2013 4:39:00 PM

Well penned my dear,love your grand style. Haven't seen you comment on people's works,are u still with us? Am really concerned,will be delighted if you kindly rePly by commenting on one of my poems. Wishing you the best. Love and hugs, Always Baron Of Ebullion.