Alkas Poetry Poet Free verse

So Sad

It is cheerless not to notice
             anything from you ... O lost ship
            between instincts and confines ...

             It's dismal not to realize
             to where you disappeared ...
             O fallen leaf of the cold afternoon
             in the biggest storm
             of unloving ...

             Doleful lose your presence...
             ... your countenance run away
             in verbal actions, so thorough
             of certainties ...

             It is depressed not to visualize you,
             nor find you on maps,
             and have no prospects
             to reach you ...
             It is só sad to be aware of
             this tremendous uncertainty ...!

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 21, 2020 at 12:40 PM Hello Alakas, sometimes on person does not feel the love for the person they are with. but the other person loves that person. it is called one sided love. that is so sad. many of us go through this. it hurts. also takes time to heal. Salute Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Unseeking Seeker September 21, 2020 at 6:05 AM Poignantly sad and yet we must stoically accept that what is, just is ~ finding solace in extended time horizons where blurred contours of karma and prior soul agreements prompt us to rise in the face of adversity in prayerful surrender ~ in timeless time all souls inevitably aligning with the singular eternal love pulsation. Alkas Poetry September 21, 2020 at 10:03 AM Wonderful reeinterpretation of the sadness that I tried to put in a text of lost love ... the suffering of the truth of the loss and the uncertainty of the reunion with the being that the soul loved from the heart ... Congratulations friend poet salute alkas