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So Precious To Let Go

Let your pain flow into words like waterfall Let your suffering shape you hard and never fall Your ache I do share Your crave I am of aware Your mum ceased to be that was her date Your soul in loss that’s your fate The fire inside is still alive Mum too early left my life Don’t cry to you I won’t spell that word out Weeping your loving mum is a consolation with no doubt Dreams at night could spark Your mum would light what in you is dark Don’t whine to you I won’t recommend Your love for your mum will have no end For your sorrow I do care But I can’t say it’s unfair The hands of God are everywhere Blessing and mercy will embrace you everyday You are choked with grief Your mum’s memories for you are a relief For being so dark you are not to blame Your mum is here no more it is for me the same Death passed by and left a scar The wound is too deep healing is far The soul is hurt I do understand Your mum used to lend you a caring hand It is meant to be dear bear no grudge And you no one can judge It is hard what you were in put through The harm is so harsh I quite knew You now moan more and more Your mum you won’t see any more You will touch hug and kiss no more Her care love and very presence now you need more May God fill you with mighty strength May God enlighten your faith May your precious mum rest in peace May you be without her a whole not a piece Mums remain precious beyond many a word Mums remain in our hearts even when they leave our world.

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Date: 4/2/2018 8:28:00 AM
Mothers are very precious, I know that Muslims believe paradise lies under their feet.. A deep emotive write Besma.. you write very well..
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/2/2018 8:46:00 AM
Sometimes we take our mothers for granted but when the leave our very world we recognize their importance, value, presence.. Indeed we do believe that Paradise is under mothers feet.. Thank you for your generous and kind comment Silent One. I'm deeply humbled.

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