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So Much Optimism

In the absence of complication, trials and tribulations become distant memories. So many wonderful moments. Distorted in the exact right ways. Becoming more cherished at each thought. In the absence of truth, stress and disappointment enter your dendrite field. So let’s not have that. Instead, let us rejoice and cherish Each moment for it is ours and ours alone. Above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes - inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind. So much optimism! So much hope! Wide swaths of faith! Whether you are religious or not, Spirituality is alive and well in your heart. Your mind recognizes this at a mystical level. Above this earthly plane, angelic hosts lift us onto their laps during sleep times, nurturing us softly so we can hear our unique voices. Ah, sweet sleep. Nurturing us gently. Thank you ever so much! Written 11-21-2019 Sponsor: Silent One Contest: Complete The Poem, in the Absence of Complication

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Date: 12/2/2019 2:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2019 8:48:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 12/1/2019 9:01:00 PM
Love the second stanza! Sings out to me! congratulations, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2019 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 12/1/2019 4:04:00 PM
you wrote a great entry.. however the aim of the contest was to have the four lines as one stanza.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Silent one. I usually do something a bit "off" - no worries!
Date: 12/1/2019 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Caren :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 12/1/2019 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Gregory.
Date: 11/22/2019 4:41:00 AM
A wonderful poem again... Best wishes in the contest. Bless you dear friend, Gina
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/22/2019 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Regina. It is always a HUGE challenge to me when someone throws in specific words or specific rhymes, but Trixie my muse, wants to try everything!

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