So Much In Love - Lyrics Again Contest

I think of you ... when I hear music
Whilst play..ing  .....our special song

The tears I shed are no deny...ing ......
of the loss ..... inside

I feel you close.....your kisses haunt me
I Love you so, ......why did u go

You said goodbye with teardrops falling
Whispering that you don't want ... to leave me ...leave me so

I wait for letters, saying .... that u miss me 
your calls  to hear you say my name

Come spring we'll be ... together
Ne'er ...to part ..... to part again

I bite my lips to stop from crying
from shouting .....out .....your name

I write each day to you my darling
in my dia..ry of love ... to ease .... ease the pain

Violin 

Want to reach out and feel .... you near me
hold you close, ....never let go
I love u so my heart .... is breaking
the pieces blowing .....in the wind

My life is lonely  here without you
Walking the avenue of love

Wishing that you were here beside me
Holding my hand ..so much in love


Violin

So ...much ...in ...love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations on your win Serena.
Roberts Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Thank you Brenda, hope you sang my words to the music, they fit quite well...Seren
Franceschini Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 9:26 AM
seren, beautiful love song and your heart spoke lyrics to the music. i enjoyed so much! thank you for your talent hugs
Roberts Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Hello Margaret, did you listen to the music as you read the winners......Seren
Smith Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 9:50 PM
I just sang this and it was beautiful....congrats on your great win....hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:32 PM
so where is the copy of your singing Tim.... thanks for congrats ....Seren
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 3:44 PM
wonderful flow to this lyric - i especially adore the final two stanzas - so much hope here Seren many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:33 PM
I am in shock that I was placed, when I listened and listened and listened to the music,I felt as though it was writing itself, then after a few lines had to start thinking.lol...Seren
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. Hey Seren, you are doing so well
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Am in shock but so pleased with this placement...Seren
Yvonne Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 2:42 PM
me too so much in love with this song.
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:39 PM
So come on Maurice, sing it for me....Seren
Smith Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Such a sweet and loving song....hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Thx Tim......Seren
Mehta Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Nice flow, a great lyrical write, Seren. good luck.
Roberts Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Thx Ram for stopping by...Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:26 AM
Wow amazingly beautiful lyric Seren! Sure to win hearts! Best wishes!
Roberts Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 7:45 PM
Thx Upma for your lovely comment ....Seren
Lindley Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 10:11 PM
This wins me over...Great contest, I did not enter because I am lousy with song lyrics. Can not sing or write them well. God luck in the contest!
Roberts Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 7:45 PM
Thx Robert, for your kind words....Seren
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