John Loving Iii Poet Pantoum

So Merrily

she walked so merrily into my heart
twas so very rarely done
our two spirits joined as one
two hearts made into one and rare kind of love begun
twas so very rarely done
what a happiness to behold
two hearts made onto one and rare kind of love begun
saddness and insecurity devoured and shunned
twas so very rarely done
our two spirits joined as one
saddness and insecurity devoured and shunned
she walked so merrily into my heart

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Wilma Neels September 17, 2010 at 5:46 AM Love shared, something to cherish. Thanks for the comment and the laughs today ;) Wilma

Phyllis Babcock September 9, 2010 at 2:42 PM Enjoyed the read John. Just got home from a funeral and the couple were married for 71 years. This was two spirits joined as one. God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire September 8, 2010 at 1:56 PM You should definitely consider entering the "Eternal Beings" contest, John. It's right up your alley! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau September 4, 2010 at 12:14 PM O how poetry gives the locked door such a large window to view what most keep hidden ! Fantastic display of a poet jauntily sharing without being... raffish ! I enjoyed this write John ! james

Carolyn Devonshire September 2, 2010 at 9:10 PM Thanks for reading about Griselda. It was only intended to be funny, John. So many people hide their real age on the Internet! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick September 2, 2010 at 10:02 AM I especially like the third line..Great to meet someone that you feel that the two spirits join as one..Keep the creative pen flowing..I am glad that you saw that my poem was about a out of the body experience..It changed me..I will finish the story later about the second half of the hospital stay...Have a great day filled with creativeness and inspiration..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire September 2, 2010 at 10:01 AM A wonderful poem, John. It exposes both the joy and sadness in relationships. Hope you enter this one in Jared's contests. Love, Carolyn