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So Merrily

she walked so merrily into my heart twas so very rarely done our two spirits joined as one two hearts made into one and rare kind of love begun twas so very rarely done what a happiness to behold two hearts made onto one and rare kind of love begun saddness and insecurity devoured and shunned twas so very rarely done our two spirits joined as one saddness and insecurity devoured and shunned she walked so merrily into my heart

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Wilma Neels

Date: 9/17/2010 5:46:00 AM

Love shared, something to cherish. Thanks for the comment and the laughs today ;) Wilma

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/9/2010 2:42:00 PM

Enjoyed the read John. Just got home from a funeral and the couple were married for 71 years. This was two spirits joined as one. God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/8/2010 1:56:00 PM

You should definitely consider entering the "Eternal Beings" contest, John. It's right up your alley! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 9/4/2010 12:14:00 PM

O how poetry gives the locked door such a large window to view what most keep hidden ! Fantastic display of a poet jauntily sharing without being... raffish ! I enjoyed this write John ! james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/2/2010 9:10:00 PM

Thanks for reading about Griselda. It was only intended to be funny, John. So many people hide their real age on the Internet! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2010 10:02:00 AM

I especially like the third line..Great to meet someone that you feel that the two spirits join as one..Keep the creative pen flowing..I am glad that you saw that my poem was about a out of the body experience..It changed me..I will finish the story later about the second half of the hospital stay...Have a great day filled with creativeness and inspiration..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/2/2010 10:01:00 AM

A wonderful poem, John. It exposes both the joy and sadness in relationships. Hope you enter this one in Jared's contests. Love, Carolyn