Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Free verse

So It Shall Be Written

It was so written on the 
sheaves of the stars
on the wings of the wind
on the waves of the seas
on the cool mist of the dawn
on every breath and every smile
on flowers, leaves and grains of sand--
Did you read it...I Love You?


~07/24/15
~"Shweet" contest by Andrea Dietrich

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MD Johnson August 2, 2015 at 1:02 AM Beautiful and sweet. Enjoyed very much. Abdul Malik Mandani August 2, 2015 at 12:25 PM Thanks Michael. Appreciate your comments.

Robert Lindley August 1, 2015 at 10:15 PM Congrats on a very fine win! A7 Abdul Malik Mandani August 2, 2015 at 12:26 PM Thanks Robert.

Laura Leiser July 30, 2015 at 2:19 PM I enjoyed this poem very much, Abdul! A 7 and congrats from me :) Abdul Malik Mandani August 2, 2015 at 12:26 PM Glad you liked it. Tried to write wherever I could. Thanks

Carrie Richards July 30, 2015 at 10:12 AM Couldn't be more lovely !!! Congratulations on a beautiful win !! Abdul Malik Mandani August 2, 2015 at 12:24 PM So did you read it? lol. Thanks for your comments.

Lycia Harding July 30, 2015 at 8:22 AM Excellent write, Abdul! Congrats on your win. xoxo Abdul Malik Mandani August 2, 2015 at 12:27 PM Thanks Lycia.

Casarah Nance July 30, 2015 at 7:06 AM Aww that was very sweet, love written everywhere :-) Abdul Malik Mandani July 30, 2015 at 8:57 AM Thanks for your Schweet comments.

Skat A July 30, 2015 at 3:32 AM Abdul, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A July 30, 2015 at 2:05 AM Absolutely a great choice. Abdul, it's like reading music for the soul. Awesomely done... Congrats. LINDA Abdul Malik Mandani July 30, 2015 at 9:00 AM Thanks for your nice comments.

Jan Allison July 30, 2015 at 1:58 AM Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx Abdul Malik Mandani July 30, 2015 at 9:00 AM Thanks Jan, YOU are the pal!

Lee Carter July 30, 2015 at 12:18 AM I love your poem congrats on your great win! ~lee

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2015 at 11:39 PM this is simplicity at its best, Abdul. My only suggestion would be to call it So (it) Shall be Written, for a more grammatical sounding title. The poem is just beautiful! Congrats on a great placement. Abdul Malik Mandani July 30, 2015 at 8:55 AM "So IT shall be written!". Thanks Andrea.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 29, 2015 at 11:37 PM Wonderful write abdul! Congrats on big win! Abdul Malik Mandani July 30, 2015 at 8:56 AM Thanks Upma. Appreciate much.

Kelly Deschler July 25, 2015 at 10:57 PM Such lovely, romantic lines, Abdul. I really enjoyed reading this one ...Good luck in Andrea's contest! Abdul Malik Mandani July 26, 2015 at 12:17 PM Thanks Kelly, but...DID YOU READ IT?! lol

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 4:49 PM this is charming Abdul - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx