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So It Shall Be Written

It was so written on the sheaves of the stars on the wings of the wind on the waves of the seas on the cool mist of the dawn on every breath and every smile on flowers, leaves and grains of sand-- Did you read it...I Love You? ~07/24/15 ~"Shweet" contest by Andrea Dietrich

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Md Johnson

Date: 8/2/2015 1:02:00 AM

Beautiful and sweet. Enjoyed very much.

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/2/2015 12:25:00 PM

Thanks Michael. Appreciate your comments.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2015 10:15:00 PM

Congrats on a very fine win! A7

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/2/2015 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Robert.

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:19:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem very much, Abdul! A 7 and congrats from me :)

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/2/2015 12:26:00 PM

Glad you liked it. Tried to write wherever I could. Thanks

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/30/2015 10:12:00 AM

Couldn't be more lovely !!! Congratulations on a beautiful win !!

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/2/2015 12:24:00 PM

So did you read it? lol. Thanks for your comments.

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/30/2015 8:22:00 AM

Excellent write, Abdul! Congrats on your win. xoxo

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/2/2015 12:27:00 PM

Thanks Lycia.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/30/2015 7:06:00 AM

Aww that was very sweet, love written everywhere :-)

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/30/2015 8:57:00 AM

Thanks for your Schweet comments.

Skat A

Date: 7/30/2015 3:32:00 AM

Abdul, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:05:00 AM

Absolutely a great choice. Abdul, it's like reading music for the soul. Awesomely done... Congrats. LINDA

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/30/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thanks for your nice comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/30/2015 1:58:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/30/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thanks Jan, YOU are the pal!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/30/2015 12:18:00 AM

I love your poem congrats on your great win! ~lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2015 11:39:00 PM

this is simplicity at its best, Abdul. My only suggestion would be to call it So (it) Shall be Written, for a more grammatical sounding title. The poem is just beautiful! Congrats on a great placement.

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/30/2015 8:55:00 AM

"So IT shall be written!". Thanks Andrea.