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So I May Keep My Desires

Without a wrinkle Sleep engulfs me completely I need dreams to come So I may keep my desires At the footsteps of the bed Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/26/2017 5:33:00 PM
Russel, this is really creative. I like it a lot. I am having to take sleeping pills now, so I really desire for sleep to engulf ME (and without leaving me with a wrinkle on the left side of my mouth. Grrrrr)
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Date: 7/26/2017 12:14:00 AM
an engaging tanka, so 'in the moment' an experience well expressed, russel... your imagination is boundless.. huggs
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