Sue Mason Poet Free verse

So Fine

They call it three-quarter time
so put your hand in  mine
and we can boogie woogie
all night long.

This syncopated rhythm
is very unforgiving
we'll be working up a sweat
all night long.

As the harmony begins
our feet mirror like twins
doing the boogie woogie
all night long.

Feel the muscles scream
as I swing and you lean
oh, we are so fine
all night long.

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Carrie Richards March 28, 2009 at 8:01 AM I am dancing in my head...but given the chance...I dance in the living room with my grandkids like a crazy woman!! This makes me want to turn up the music!! ~ :)

Sharon Winter March 28, 2009 at 6:11 AM Sounds awesome. Dancing is something I don't do too often and miss way too much! Such a fun write! Love, Shar

Arany P. March 28, 2009 at 1:03 AM this write is so much fun ... the boogie woogie... is so cute!! ~ Arany

Lena Townsend March 27, 2009 at 10:14 PM You make it sound like so much fun! I loved dancing but due to some knee injuries it is not really a possibility for me any longer. Thank you for allowing me to dance in on this one. In my mind through your words I was able to "boogie woogie" as I read along. great imagery and great writing. Smiles from Lolita

Belinda Parish March 27, 2009 at 7:10 PM I enjoyed this write Sue. Got some foot work going on ...lol.

Tyesha Ehigiator March 27, 2009 at 6:26 PM This is a fun one, love the rhyme and the tune...I had to sing this Boogie Woogie All Night Long... I bet y'all were some "dancin kats"...Nicely done.GB Always Tyesha