So Devine

As by some devine presence,
I've been burdened with the gift of life.

Things become completely complicated,
playing this game,
our teeth become enticed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Poe Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 10:30 PM
This is really good. I can never do short poems well, so I really admire people who can.
Scianna Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 11:30 PM
Thank you raven, I really appreciate the comment on my work.il def go and look sy your work and make comments on the ones I enjoy.
Jones Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 6:04 AM
lol, yep! diggin' your writes, thanks :) ~N
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