Christian Mitsiaras Poet Sonnet

So Cold and Withdrawn

So cold and withdrawn,
A way to preserve,
From misery and pain 
No man could deserve. 

Her beauty with charm,
Shed light on a crack,
With love and persistance 
Her way of attack.

A good year of company,
A long year of friendship,
A bond now has formed,
No force to break or to bend it. 

Yet comes one fatal day,
Her mind how its changed,
Now with pain and with misery 
Is this man now deranged. 

For so long a heart can bleed,
All battered and torn,
Now this day again,
So cold and withdrawn.

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Beata Agustin October 11, 2025 at 10:47 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2010 at 12:08 PM Interesting words that you have penned in this write on the topic of what seems to be perfect love that goes sour like butter milk..Sara

Poet Destroyer A August 4, 2010 at 9:08 AM One day it is there the next day,, well I get the feeling, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.