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So Close, But Yet So Far Away

You're so close, but yet so far away Even on the longest never ending days I don't know why, but you make me wanna say How did I find someone so perfect in every way You're in my thoughts no matter how far You shine brighter than any star Our love is so strong there is no boarder The distance between the two of us only makes it stronger Every night before I go to bed The thoughts of us, rush through my head I lay my head on my pillow wishing it was you The thought of you next to me is what gets me through & after everything you put me through, I still miss you So close, but yet so far away The love between us will never stray. -- by Hilary & I. best friends for life!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/28/2016 7:32:00 PM
Payton, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/10/2015 10:47:00 PM
Payton, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:24:00 AM
Many congratulations Payton on your win in Miranda's contest with this fine poem :)
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Date: 6/21/2011 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Randa's "Behind Bars Blues" contest Payton. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:26:00 AM
Congrats Payton on your HM in the contest for this wonderful write..enjoy honor with luv..
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:19:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of miranda, Payton
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:50:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry.. enjoy the site as u share words with luv..
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:45:00 PM
Lovely expressions on the feelings of love, Payton
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Date: 6/8/2011 7:14:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Payton. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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