Payton Beougher Poet Rhyme

So Close, But Yet So Far Away

You're so close, but yet so far away
Even on the longest never ending days
I don't know why, but you make me wanna say
How did I find someone so perfect in every way
You're in my thoughts no matter how far
You shine brighter than any star
Our love is so strong there is no boarder
The distance between the two of us only makes it stronger
Every night before I go to bed
The thoughts of us, rush through my head
I lay my head on my pillow wishing it was you
The thought of you next to me is what gets me through
& after everything you put me through, I still miss you
So close, but yet so far away
The love between us will never stray.
 
                     -- by Hilary & I. 
best friends for life!

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akira artly September 24, 2026 at 9:55 AM I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly

Poet Destroyer A March 28, 2016 at 7:32 PM Payton, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~

Skat A August 10, 2015 at 10:47 PM Payton, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*

James Fraser June 21, 2011 at 11:24 AM Many congratulations Payton on your win in Miranda's contest with this fine poem :)

Carol Sunshine Brown June 21, 2011 at 9:59 AM Congratulations on your win in Randa's "Behind Bars Blues" contest Payton. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 18, 2011 at 10:26 AM Congrats Payton on your HM in the contest for this wonderful write..enjoy honor with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 18, 2011 at 10:19 AM My congratulations on the win in the contest of miranda, Payton

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 9, 2011 at 9:50 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry.. enjoy the site as u share words with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2011 at 1:45 PM Lovely expressions on the feelings of love, Payton

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2011 at 7:14 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Payton. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol