So Busy

I have pinched, pruned, planted, fertilized and even mowed...
I have dug, dressed, divided, harvested and hoed.

Then I thinned, trimmed, transplanted, sprayed, sowed and staked...
Then I wheeled, watered, weeded, rototilled and raked.

I loosened, limed and layered, that's me; gardening by the book...
But there was one thing I neglected, I was so busy I forgot to look.

My flowers were as beautiful as could be...
And I was so busy I didn't see.

                        TK<><
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Squires Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:11 PM
I enjoyed the read, cute poem. Thanks.
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 8:26 PM
You use wonderful imagery and maintain a poetic flow through the whole piece.
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Lovely imagery and alliteration Tom:-) Hugs jan xx
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