So Brief the Time

The lilacs have come and gone, so brief was their time,
fragile flowers like some, who seldom linger long,
their purple prominence a pantomime of our springtime.

Full heart-shaped clusters pump perfume so sublime
a gift from heaven, mother nature can't prolong,
the lilac has come and gone, so brief was their time.

Harvest home to birthing butterflies in sunny climes
brought low by the battering rain of May’s swan song,
their purple prominence a pantomime of our springtime.

Unmated, virginal, a merry gift, most sacred in its prime	
a rust red blight upon the cloth, a crown of thorns once gone,	      	
the lilacs have come and gone so brief was their time.

Let shoots reform and hollowed make a flute to pass time		
to cheer our mother merry and sooth the wearied throng,
their purple prominence a pantomime of our springtime

Like they, we spring forth, summer, fall and wintertime	
may our seed justly arise in the beauty of heart song,		
The lilacs have come and gone so brief was their time,
their purple prominence a pantomime of our springtime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/27/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 8:35:00 AM
Glad to see your beautiful work placed high in the contest Debbie.Congrats to you dear... love, gautami
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 6:23:00 AM
I found such amazing images here hun. Many congrats for this win Debbie.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 7:34:00 PM
Simply GORGEOUS, DEBS, Oh my gosh, one of your best lyrical writings I have seen to date!! Lucid, lyrical, and Lovely. What is not to love about this one. Awesome!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 3:05:00 PM
It must have been hard to judge these poems. We have been graced with some real beauties and yours right up there among them where it deserves to be! Congrats to you Debbie I really like the alliteration and how it rolls.
Login to Reply
Guzzi Avatar
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/23/2011 3:13:00 PM
thanks so much in this form you really need to pay attention to what you repeat ;)
Guzzi Avatar
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/23/2011 3:13:00 PM
thanks so much in this form you really need to pay attention to what you repeat ;)
Date: 6/23/2011 2:43:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Debs : )
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 1:13:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of actie, Debbie
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 9:35:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful winning poem in the contest .. an excellent creative journey luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 9:26:00 AM
Love the way your related the lilacs to human life, Deb. You're on a roll with wins today! Congratulations, dear. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 8:18:00 AM
Ahhh...love this, like reading a poem from a book of classic and ancient poetry!! Congrats on your win, dear Deb!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2011 3:12:00 AM
A breathtakingly beautiful villanelle on the lilacs. Best wishes for the contest Debbie, love, gautami
Login to Reply
Date: 5/23/2011 5:56:00 AM
A beautiful acknowledgement to Spring, are these lovely flowers. Great imagery comes forth from these "hollowed...flute"s. Tiny perfumed cornucopias of colour. Love this, Debbie!! Best wishes! Mikki
Login to Reply
Date: 5/22/2011 2:59:00 PM
Hey this help each other co-operation is WORKING [I made a rhyme pattern booboo and a nice poets caught it and TOLD me hey Deb, line x hint, hint!] ain't friendship grand!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/22/2011 2:32:00 PM
Hi Debbi Guzzi! Cool name....I haveno piggy tails...how adorable a thot tho. Thanks for the elevating comments on the 60's net poem...OH THE LILACS!! If you could just throw the last remnants of them into a bottle and tip the lid every once in a while to get a hint of their magical aroma....I went out with my camera the other day to capture a lilac bush across the street (in the morning sun) and they were way past bloom. Bummer. Love this poem tho.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/22/2011 9:45:00 AM
Love the subtle way you intertwine nature and life. Very well written and a gem to read and enjoy. xoxo
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2011 5:32:00 PM
nice bright visuals with the lovely lilacs representing other things throughout this piece Debbie.. enjoyed as a birthday treat luv..thankxx..
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2011 4:59:00 PM
very beautiful...sounds like it was written long ago...love it. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2011 3:27:00 PM
This is divine, Deb,and I fully expect to see it at the top!! way to Pantoum.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2011 3:06:00 PM
Very nice write Debbie! You surely put alot of vision, mood, and creativity bringing the villanelle form to light and life.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2011 3:04:00 PM
A breath of beauty ..... simply wonderful, and lifts the heart to read line by line. (I miss my lilacs blooming...too brief their time!) I have two glorious bushes against the garden fence....they were wonderful this year!
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter