So Blank So Open So Dormant An Inbox

How empty can an inbox possibly be?
Not unlike a door..... practically off at hinges
The paint is definitely peeling
More than one shutter has fallen astray. 

One piece at a time

Have you ever seen that?
How old houses....
 the shutters give way one slat at a time
It's almost like watching a clock tick
After 1 year the slat on the front shutter drops by 1/4 
of an inch
By year two there are three slats on the front shutter and four on the back falling falling slowly 
Drop an inch...drop an inch
 small little pieces of wood losing their ballast

By year five the paint's chipping on all of the shutters 
you can tell they were all red once or some dreadful pungent green

Then great shards of paint seem to start clinging off of the clapboards too
Can see it almost like a song
plunky pock rock or a slow lanquid sad ballad

a song of one lost a sea or to storm or just decay

the first chip of paint is the first note
 and then all of a sudden the whole house seems to want to join in and it's chip chip chip , chuck,chuck pluck pluck plunky plunkity and it's a symphony of lost paint chips like raindrops sound in an empty metal pail 

Neglect 
nobody cares ....that the shutters are falling apart
 and no one cares that the symphony of chips of paint has begun 
because nobody lives there anymore and no one is listening except fro teh occasional drive by

If that house was an inbox. 
It would understand mine
Such
 an empty house

When you're the first person to enter 
an empty house...

 It's like you're swirling the dust 
of the only thing that lives there
 elves and fairies and dust dune devils
 it's like they  know you're there

But there is just the eerie silence

The elves, sprites, ghosts and memories cling to what remains of the tattered curtain...awaiting a...curtain call? 

The house is never ever really empty
The walls remember the hands

The ash remembers the fire
The sink can still taste the water and feel the rust

Even the dust on the floorboards remembers what it was like to be mud on a boot or a cell of her skin
An empty house has more inhabitants
 than my inbox
 in the beginning....My inbox had a voice
Maybe even my in-box remembers 
how it once said
"You've got mail"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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January 5, 2023 at 10:36 PM
Oh Ingrid that made me sad. I am so sorry your inbox is empty and you are lonely. I don't know you or your circumstances but is there anyway of you turning that around? Loneliness is an awful place to be. Debxx
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January 11, 2023 at 7:44 PM
Hi Deb You just made a difference My inbox is not empty tonight Thank you Do you have any wishes? I am very good at making wishes come true I would love to help you because you wanted to help me ??
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