Snuff Out

The days are cool,
The nights are cold.
My laughter fools,
My smile holds

No need, no want, no spark.

The minutes strain, 
The hours bruise.
My memories wane,
My thoughts refuse

To bleed and haunt and mark.

Wake my heart
From its cold slumber.
Count its beats
To bursting number.
Flood my chest
With ghost sensation.
Wipe the dust
From past elation.

Ignite my flame.

The days are warm,
The nights are hot.
My feelings storm,
My stomach knots.

No grief, no ache, no blow.

The minutes bless,
The hours heal.
My hopes caress,
My instincts feel
 
No thief, no snake, no foe.

Cast my heart
In jaded shadows.
Send my trust
To ruthless gallows.
Starve my need
With cruel silence.
Strike my hope
With quiet violence.

Snuff out my flame again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ryerson Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 8:30 PM
I decided to look up your first posted poem...As good as the first. 'Strike my hope With quiet violence'. Oh yes indeed...
Horstkotter Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 7:27 PM
Great poem.
Hunter Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 6:08 AM
Came to read your first poem on the soup...its a good one. You've got some really great lines here...you know how to end a poem too...Caleb
The Gypsy King Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Really good.....why it makes me smile I know not...
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 3:21 PM
wow, your first poem here and it was featured too. Congratulations for that. It's so nice to have a new SOUPER like you with us.
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 10:34 AM
I enjoyed how you paced this out give such impact of the message from each word and verse.
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:31 AM
Thank you, Michael!
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Heather. Love, Carol
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:31 AM
Thanks, Carol :)
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Lovely written this poem Heather,enjoy it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:31 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise :)
Pettit Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 10:27 AM
I also welcome you to this poetry site. It is always good to see new talent come here.
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Thanks, Robert! :)
Cochrane Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 9:00 AM
Oh this is so amazing! Reading the last verse actually gave me chills. I love "Send my trust to ruthless gallows" and "Strike my hope with quiet violence." These lines are brilliant and they really resonate with me. I think you have inspired me to write today too!
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 5:15 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Heather. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Ober Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Thank you for the very warm welcome, Carol :)
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