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Snowy Winter Days -Trine

(Trine) In winter there's a lot of snow In many places is falling I know It is so cold right now outside And snow continues to gather aside Most folks have difficulty getting everywhere There's too much snow,more than most foks can bear Snow is falling steadily hard and slow It is only growing very high and wide Folks want snow to stop,for it, they don't care. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,26,2014
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Bateman Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Love this one "D" (and, of course, the posted picture too!!). This is simply a most wonderful write. The images of winter, cold, snow are employed most effectively here. A Big "7" to you my dear on this write!! All the Best, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 12:49 PM
Hi Gary my dear friend! Thank you so much for dropping by and kind comments. Wish you a very Happy Thanksgiving Day! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Fraser Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Love the snow Dorian, especially on Christmas Day. May the flakes of success fall on your words, James :) xx
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend James, for your very kind comments! Much appreciated! Have a great evening! :) love and hugs! xxxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 11:01 AM
A nice straightforward composition reflecting the feelings of many. Snow is a joy to watch but its charm fades in the absence of sleighs.
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Hi Perry! Thank you so much my dear friend for dropping by and kind comments. Much appreciated! :) have a nice day! love and hugs! xxxx D.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 9:31 AM
I don't care much for the cold myself, but the beauty of fresh fallen snow has always appeased my eyes.
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Thank you so kindly Brenda! Have a great day! :) xxxxx D.
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 4:09 AM
absolutely charming Dorian its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Thank you very much Jan! Very much appreciated. :) xxxxx D.
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