Snowman Suntan

Meet Frosty Snowman.
WHAT!!!  BIG LUMP OF SNOW ON LAWN???
OOPS!!!   Too much sunshine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 9:39 AM
very nice visual. but what about the part where they say "No animals were harmed in the making poem. " you forgot that part.
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October 23, 2009 at 11:23 AM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Thank you for the day brightener. I like the title. Thanks also for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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October 23, 2009 at 7:41 AM
LOL! What a witty way you have of expressing poor Frosty's dilemna. Too much sunshine, indeed, can result in disaster for snowmen. Love it! Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 6:18 AM
Shock of the day. Frosty is gone in a flash. Loved it. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 4:13 AM
I enjoyed reading you poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing it Martin. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Your lawn needed watered anyways my friend. Love, Carol
Knop Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 3:34 AM
Poor snowman has too short a life! Thanks Marty for your comments. I am still very busy with packing, goes to slowly!! Will have time for new poems when I have moved...Gert
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October 23, 2009 at 2:48 AM
I'm smiling, I guess Frosty is suffering from the ultimate case of heat exhaustion. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Nunn Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 12:57 AM
A good laugh with my coffee this morning, good write Martin too much sun will get you every time..Danny
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