Snowman

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Frosty came out one snowy day With the kids he began to play Then one of the kids said Lets turn him on his head! Then the little rascals ran away! -- 12-24-17

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Silent One

Date: 12/24/2017 2:32:00 PM

Nice one Joseph..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/24/2017 1:41:00 PM

I can see the kids running away--very well depicted...best for a win, Joseph.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/24/2017 8:57:00 AM

aww what a cute poem Jospeh!:-) good luck in the contest I think Eve will have fun judging this one as I've read some fabulous interpretations of the picture:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 12/24/2017 8:51:00 AM

Lol....kids having fun... nothing better

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/24/2017 8:27:00 AM

Lol! Joseph, This is a good one. Your words matched the very well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/24/2017 8:07:00 AM

Hah ha! This is awesome! Word perfect, I love it :) my best to you in the contest, a winner for me! Merry Christmas! xomo