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Snowing, Snowing, Snowing

Snowing … Soft and Beautiful almost Bitter-Cold Thing A man watched her… from across the bar Said: “I had to come over… to where you are … sitting there drinking… Kaluah and Cream … looking like – someone’s un-awakened dream Decided to catch her … ‘fore she got away Then he asked her … what she had to say… Now, she’s listened, but wasn’t too impressed She just grouped him … with all the rest … … and said: “I’m Snowing … I’m Fragile… when I’m Falling … My heart is frozen … kept on thaw-alert I won’t let it melt … I don’t want to hurt Don’t get too close, or you may get chilled Don’t mean to be rude … that’s just how I feel… like Snowing … Soft and beautiful, but Bitter-Cold thing “ Now, I’ve heard the fairy tale of a young boy and girl Who got caught up … in an icy-world But, I’m more saddened, by what I just seen … What could have changed that woman into The Snow Queen? She’s Snowing … Such a Soft beauty, but Bitter-Cold thing She’s Snowing … Snowing … Snowing Now, the man, politely touched her arm … Got her to dance … held her close and warm … The Heat of His Heart-beat, tho’ Strong … was only fleeting He looked down into her eyes … they were sleeting … She was Snowing … Soft and beautiful, but Bitter-Cold thing She was Snowing … Snowing … Snowing Maybe, he’ll see her again, this time, next year … but … if you make her melt … She will disappear … ‘Cause She’s Snowing Such a Soft and beautiful, Bitter-Cold thing That girl is Snowing … Snowing … Snowing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 3:55:00 PM
Oh my goodness . You just keep bringing them on dear MoonBee. Have a wonderful weekend my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2009 9:33:00 PM
This is really good, I enjoy reading your poetry, you have your own style...Unique...Karla
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Date: 9/17/2009 4:16:00 PM
Like the metaphor you used here. Keep writing. Sara
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