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Snowflakes With Biting Teeth

Beautiful! Sparkly winter magic. Icy crystals smiled at us. A cheer went up. Children who refused to wake up for school arrived on Deadman’s Hill by seven. Happy laughter. Did you eat breakfast? Me neither. We dragged our sleds up the hill, delighting in the wet snow, Snowball snow, we called it, the slickest snow possible when tamped down A few times by a bunch of children piled like puppies on sleds. Our laughter resounded down the valley as we bumped into each other. Scarves and gloves were lost. Our faces were red, especially our cheeks. Ouch! My cousin hollared. Ouch! OUCH! Owwwwwcccccchhhhhhhhhh! What had started out great was turning into Armageddon! It is the snow! Someone shouted. The new flakes have biting teeth! I felt a fresh bite on the tip of my right ear. I slapped the biting snowflake. Caught him in my hand. He stuck out his tongue at me; I grabbed him by his collar bone and shook him hard. What are you doing? I demanded. He started to cry. Don’t hurt him! Yelled my pansy Cousin’s wimpy neighbor. Even my mother gets tired of his ridiculous niceness. I will take you to my commander if you let me go he said. The commander made all the biting snowflakes leave, Because he wanted his son back before I shook him to death. Written: 11-14-2018 Contest: Cool Writes and Imagination Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 11/21/2018 7:39:00 AM
There is one of those biting snowflakes in every snow. Such smart-Alecs.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/27/2018 9:16:00 PM
Um, I think you may have some vampire snowflakes. Drag out your silver cross, just in case.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/21/2018 10:12:00 AM
One? You only find one? You need to come to Kansas. They will leave you with welts in the winter time.
Date: 11/15/2018 5:36:00 AM
A biting verse Caren...love them snowflakes lol...love & light...^WW^
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Winged Warrior
Date: 11/16/2018 9:27:00 PM
God, thru His Angels, has given me the gifts of art, poetry and music...sometimes a bit of a curse, but mostly a joy...and thank you for your comments my dear friend...the Angels are smiling :)...love & light...^WW^
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/15/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior. I am still trying to get over your shape poem yesterday. I have no words yet to express how amazed I was.

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