Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Snowflakes Dance

Snowflakes 
playful
tumble fall
they glisten
as they dance
lightly fluffy
skittish yet carefree
in the moonglow
out my window



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SNOW WHITE~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on January 26, 2020 for contest STRAND CHOICE 7 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  HONORABLE MENTION

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Brenda Chiri January 27, 2020 at 2:57 PM Beautiful line! Congrats my friend!;) Line Gauthier January 27, 2020 at 6:13 PM Thank you so much, Brenda.

Bobby May January 18, 2019 at 11:59 AM Your description is perfect but I am with Tom, I will see it from the inside. lol Line Gauthier January 18, 2019 at 12:48 PM Absolutely - hence the 'out my window'. LOL Thanks for your visit and comment, Bobby.

P.S. Awtry January 10, 2019 at 9:35 AM love the playfulness of this. I could see this in a children's book (that is a compliment, as I love children's books!) glisten, dance, fluffy, moonglow--best words ever :) Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 12:37 PM Best compliment ever! Thank you so much, PS.

Heidi Sands January 10, 2019 at 8:25 AM Very nice poem. It reminds me of all the beautiful snowflakes I saw coming down yesterday. :) Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 12:37 PM Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Heidi.

Mahtab Bangalee January 10, 2019 at 5:13 AM lovely poem Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM Much appreciated, Mahtab.

Tom Cunningham January 10, 2019 at 2:35 AM Lovely image that I love to see, day or night, preferably from inside. Tom. Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM LOL I understand that, Tom.

Timothy Mcguire January 10, 2019 at 2:27 AM I am see those snowflake dancing as I read this. It was a wonderful moment. Thank you Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger January 10, 2019 at 2:24 AM What a beautiful image you have portrayed here. Bouncy and happy! I am FAVing it Line because I have to. Line Gauthier January 10, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.