An intertwining triolet poem.
Combining two or more triolets linked by repeating lines. The sixth line of the first refrain forms the first line of the next refrain and so on.
Frozen snowflakes melting on your tongue, remember how it felt the first time? Enjoying life just being young, frozen snowflakes melting on your tongue. Do you miss the fun of snowballs swung, recall how it made you feel sublime? Frozen snowflakes melting on your tongue, remember how it felt the first time? Recall how it made you feel sublime, when you saw snowflakes fall from the sky? Catching snowflakes was a happy time, recall how it made you feel sublime? Not calling a snow day was a crime, it would actually make you cry. Recall how it made you feel sublime, when you saw snowflakes fall from the sky? It would actually make you cry, when you felt snowflakes caress your cheek. Fascinated, watching the snow fly, it would actually make you cry. All excited, you were feeling spry, mesmerized and unable to speak. It would actually make you cry, when you felt snowflakes caress your cheek. (Intertwining Triolet) 11/16/2015
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