Snowflakes


Snow
Swirling ~
Enchants with
soft magic touch
Fluffies floating down
in   winter   wonderland

Ice-breeze freezes nature
Emerald  turns  white
Blooms  fall  asleep
God's love strokes 
~ Wafting
flakes



08.17.2021

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Calasibetta Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 1:50 PM
Jo congratulations on your winning "Snowflakes"~delightful! :)Paulette
Mohn Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 7:43 AM
lovely image Jo...congratulations :)
Roper Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 8:27 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jo, great verse. Hugs and blessings for a better year in your life
Alex Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 6:51 PM
"God's love strokes" - Great truth brought to light. Congratulations!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 4:49 PM
An exquisite winter scene is set with your graceful words Jo. Lovely! Congratulations on your wonderful first placement. Blessings xxoo
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:38 PM
Jo, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write and snow picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Kauffman Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Jo, this is as mesmerizing as watching snow fall and transform every part of the world into a white paradise! It is truly "God's love strokes." So well put my friend. Wonderful to see it on the winner's list - creative take on the theme especially since so many of us went with a sunrise/sunset theme. Congratulations and high fives for your win. Blessings of peacefulness for you. Winter is just around the corner hiding behind fall!
Callus Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 11:56 PM
Your poem delights with its striking imagery, Jo. Snowflakes have always been a reliable source of inspiration. ~ Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul
Mitra Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 7:37 PM
I just love to see it snow and have travelled to far off lands to do so......It does weave a certain kind of magic...... Congrats on your win Jo....All the love :)
Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Ah, your poem is simply beautiful, Jo. I adore; "Fluffies floating down" - this imagery is so unique and textured, and I admire the serene ambience your gifted pen has created; "Emerald turns white / Blooms fall asleep" - just splendid! Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations Jo, on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your golden pen. Love ~ Mala
Kannan Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 12:06 AM
Lovely imagery and an apt image... Beautifully done...
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:26 PM
love how you said emerald turns white. Great imagery , Jo.
Kauffman Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 3:18 PM
Enchanting as a morning snowfall Jo casting its hypnotic spell. All the best for the contest! Blessings!
Green Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Beautifully done my friend. It is very hot outside here right now, so this I used to cool myself down a bit. : ) Best wishes in the contest
Ibeh Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Beautiful poem and picture, Jo;-) Good luck in the contest!
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Great imagery--beautifully executed, Jo.
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 3:12 AM
- Beautiful snowfall, Jo :) - I hope it will be a long time until the snow comes - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 2:35 AM
Your wonderland is astounding. Hugs.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:39 AM
A delicate picture that goes so well with the video of falling snow. Wow!
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