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Snowflakes

Tiny snowflake ladies whirling to earth in a cavalcade of virgin white party dresses

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Fide Erken

Date: 1/29/2009 12:02:00 AM

How pretty!I see snowflake ladies, their beautiful white dresses love Fide

John Heck

Date: 12/5/2008 7:39:00 PM

One of the prettiest and visual poems I've read this week! Magical and breathtaking. A perfect Christmas fairytale set to words. Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/5/2008 1:38:00 PM

happy poem ok and fine, really went off my tongue very well, and settled in the mind well too.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/5/2008 10:10:00 AM

Please read the other five parts... no need to comment. Also, if you like Eliot please look at 'Nightscapes' and 'Forecasts', also Eliot tributes. Thanks!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/5/2008 9:36:00 AM

You have captured to fragility of the snowflake so well here... I like your '-irl, -ear, -ir' assonance. Well done Valerie! Best wishes, Keith

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/4/2008 4:14:00 PM

Gorfeous imagry and language, so beautiful. love, Kristin

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/4/2008 11:52:00 AM

Valerie this poem is just perfect - great use of this form - God Bless, MJ