Snowflakes

Tiny snowflake ladies
whirling to earth
in a cavalcade
of virgin white party dresses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Erken Avatar
January 29, 2009 at 12:02 AM
How pretty!I see snowflake ladies, their beautiful white dresses love Fide
Heck Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 7:39 PM
One of the prettiest and visual poems I've read this week! Magical and breathtaking. A perfect Christmas fairytale set to words. Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
Burton Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 1:38 PM
happy poem ok and fine, really went off my tongue very well, and settled in the mind well too.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 10:10 AM
Please read the other five parts... no need to comment. Also, if you like Eliot please look at 'Nightscapes' and 'Forecasts', also Eliot tributes. Thanks!!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 9:36 AM
You have captured to fragility of the snowflake so well here... I like your '-irl, -ear, -ir' assonance. Well done Valerie! Best wishes, Keith
Reynolds Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 4:14 PM
Gorfeous imagry and language, so beautiful. love, Kristin
Jordan Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 11:52 AM
Valerie this poem is just perfect - great use of this form - God Bless, MJ
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