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In winters softness
          each flake of snow seeks refuge-
               ill winds take umbrage

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John Michaels

Date: 5/22/2017 5:14:00 PM

Lovely Haiku, Charlie! Well done! Regards, John.

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/24/2017 7:11:00 AM

thank you John.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/25/2017 11:39:00 PM

Love the haiku, I haven't been on a horse since 5-6 yrs old.

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/26/2017 7:24:00 AM

That's too long, thanks Debbie...

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 2/14/2017 8:38:00 AM

Great haiku Charlie, you made the flakes come alive in the last line!

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/14/2017 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Keith...

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 1/22/2017 6:39:00 AM

Short and sweet.This is what I like about Haiku. Well penned. :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/22/2017 8:13:00 AM

Thank you Sunita...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/21/2017 6:04:00 PM

Very beautiful well written Haiku!

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/21/2017 6:55:00 PM

Thank you Arthur...

Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/19/2017 1:09:00 PM

Great writing about winters softness! I almost hear a double meaning about life. Excellent, Charlie. My best to you, Chuck

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 7:34:00 AM

It was there, thank you Chuck...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/19/2017 12:24:00 PM

Winter painted to perfection dear, Charlie! A seven my friend!

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/19/2017 12:45:00 PM

Thank you my friend...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/19/2017 11:17:00 AM

nice 'aha' moment and 'ku, charlie... grreat stuff!..huggs

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/19/2017 11:40:00 AM

Thank you Nette...

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/19/2017 8:51:00 AM

Beautifully done Charlie...damn winds lol...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/19/2017 10:39:00 AM

Thanks WW...

Paul Callus

Date: 1/19/2017 6:09:00 AM

A lovely little offering, Charlie; snow looks so beautiful, but then it also reminds me of cold weather, something which I suffer a lot!! // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/19/2017 8:16:00 AM

Keep a warm fire aglow Paul, thank you...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/18/2017 1:27:00 AM

I like this one, Charlie:) the picture is so cute too:) wish to see snow someday!!!

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 10:58:00 AM

Thank you Jo, hope your wish comes true...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2017 9:26:00 PM

wow, I love this one and its picture.

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/17/2017 9:36:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Eve Roper

Date: 1/17/2017 8:25:00 PM

This is a great Haiku, Charlie, :) a 7

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/17/2017 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Eve...

Chris Green

Date: 1/17/2017 5:41:00 PM

This was fantastic. Really nice Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/17/2017 9:04:00 PM

You are too kind Chris, thank you...

Joseph May

Date: 1/17/2017 3:36:00 PM

Great haiku Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/17/2017 9:04:00 PM

Thank you Joseph...

Tim Smith

Date: 1/17/2017 2:19:00 PM

terrific haiku and I love the pic you chose.

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/17/2017 9:02:00 PM

Thank you Tim...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2017 1:20:00 PM

- A beautiful haiku, Charlie - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/17/2017 9:00:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise...

Barry Stebbings

Date: 1/17/2017 12:35:00 PM

Nice winter Haiku, Charlie. // Barry.

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/17/2017 9:00:00 PM

Thank you Barry...

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