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Snowflake

In winters softness
          each flake of snow seeks refuge-
               ill winds take umbrage
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Michaels Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 5:14 PM
Lovely Haiku, Charlie! Well done! Regards, John.
Smith Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 7:11 AM
thank you John.
Duncan Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 11:39 PM
Love the haiku, I haven't been on a horse since 5-6 yrs old.
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 7:24 AM
That's too long, thanks Debbie...
O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Great haiku Charlie, you made the flakes come alive in the last line!
Smith Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Thank you Keith...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 6:39 AM
Short and sweet.This is what I like about Haiku. Well penned. :)
Smith Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Thank you Sunita...
Vaso Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 6:04 PM
Very beautiful well written Haiku!
Smith Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 6:55 PM
Thank you Arthur...
Melugin Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Great writing about winters softness! I almost hear a double meaning about life. Excellent, Charlie. My best to you, Chuck
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 7:34 AM
It was there, thank you Chuck...
Trifiatis Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 12:24 PM
Winter painted to perfection dear, Charlie! A seven my friend!
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Thank you my friend...
Onclaud Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 11:17 AM
nice 'aha' moment and 'ku, charlie... grreat stuff!..huggs
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Thank you Nette...
Warrior Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Beautifully done Charlie...damn winds lol...god bless...^WW^
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 10:39 AM
Thanks WW...
Callus Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 6:09 AM
A lovely little offering, Charlie; snow looks so beautiful, but then it also reminds me of cold weather, something which I suffer a lot!! // paul
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Keep a warm fire aglow Paul, thank you...
Daniel Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 1:27 AM
I like this one, Charlie:) the picture is so cute too:) wish to see snow someday!!!
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Jo, hope your wish comes true...
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:26 PM
wow, I love this one and its picture.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:36 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Roper Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 8:25 PM
This is a great Haiku, Charlie, :) a 7
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:05 PM
Thank you Eve...
Green Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:41 PM
This was fantastic. Really nice Charlie.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:04 PM
You are too kind Chris, thank you...
May Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Great haiku Charlie.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Thank you Joseph...
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 2:19 PM
terrific haiku and I love the pic you chose.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Thank you Tim...
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 1:20 PM
- A beautiful haiku, Charlie - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise...
Stebbings Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Nice winter Haiku, Charlie. // Barry.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Thank you Barry...
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