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Snowflake

The streetlights cast a yellow glow against the darkening evening.  I pull my collar higher against the bite of the wind, the kind of cold that promises change.  Overhead, the sky is a heavy, bruised violet, ready to burst.  And then, it begins—not a downpour, but a tentative, silent drift.  Individual crystals, each a fleeting architectural miracle, unique from one another, begin their slow descent from the sky to the frozen ground.  The world around me starts to soften, hard edges blurring under a gentle, accumulating lace.  My breath forms tiny clouds in the crisp air as I catch a single, perfect star on the tip of my glove, a transient visitor from the heavens, a small piece of silent magic.

sky slips first snowflake
like frosting on a cupcake
liquid world keepsake
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Vaso Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 11:38 PM
Beautiful brings me back some memories!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Welcoming sentiments. Aloha.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 5:11 PM
wow, a truly magnificent Haibun. I love writing in that form but haven't done so in some time. You've inspired me with this masterpiece, sincerely. Faving
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Many thanks, looking forward to yours someday soon, to all of the holidays, best to you.
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 9:20 PM
Wonderful, Hilo. Love that haiku too
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 9:56 PM
My heartfelt thanks, Andrea. Aloha.
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