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Snowfall As the snowflakes slid down in air, the winter resumes its perfect flair, Our warm breaths smoke, the frozen engines choke, Shiver smiles in conditioned rooms, stars wink to the hearts in gloom, White cover gives a tight embrace shining to bright sun's morning grace, Snow capped mountains and trees enthral, As passion heats up the mystic snowfall. Written Nov 20th, 2015 For contest by Shadow Fifth place win

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Date: 11/26/2015 7:32:00 AM
Nice poem, Dr. Upma. And you sent me flying to the dictionary to learn an alternate spelling for the word enthrall. Thanks
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Date: 11/25/2015 5:33:00 PM
Great imagery, Upma! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:13:00 PM
i love snow - this is just beautiful
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:53:00 PM
"Our warm breaths smoke, the frozen engines choke," I can relate to these lines so well. Vehicles hate the cold and you never know when you will get stuck in the cold. It is always a marvel to watch someones breath in the cold air, and often movie producers forget that they can fake snow but when you don't see the actors breath it reminds you they are just on a movie set. That kind of ruins it for me. I loved your unique poem Dr. Sharma! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/21/2015 4:07:00 AM
"Stars wink to the hearts in gloom" very nice, Upma. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:48:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful imagery Dr Sharma:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2015 10:10:00 PM
I see this was a winner, congrats! I often find poems about snow or rain etc boring, and redundant, however, here, I found this poem refreshing and inspirational, a sure compliment to the poet! hugs
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:08:00 PM
BIG congrats to you, Dr. Upma. Snow is everywhere at poetrysoup!
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:00:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT
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