Snowed Sun

Wintry Siberia from east to west
White snow bedecks earth’s crest
When clouds go, the sun shines bright
Won’t melt the snow, given all its might.

Date: 24.8.2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 3:13 PM
excellent example of this form. Eventually I will post mine too, also on nature. Good luck in the contest. I think you won't need any luck!
Onclaud Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 1:36 PM
you've captured the very essence of the sun's full glow.. I like this, mohan.. huggs
Chutani Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 6:49 PM
glad that you likeed it Nette.
Xia Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Really paints a picture, I like it!
Chutani Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Princess, thanks for your appreciation. would like to visit your page soon. Mohan
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