Snowdrifts

snow piling higher driven by a wildling storm~ winter's icy breath January 16, 2022 Winter Haiku Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Checked with howmanysyllables

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/3/2022 7:39:00 AM

Such a fine Haiku that captures snowdrifts + storms as an "icy breath" of winter. Best wishes, Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/19/2022 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "snowdrifts" is a wonderful winter write. Now I am cold. Off to get some coffee. Have a blessed day and stay warm..............

Lin Lane
Date: 1/19/2022 8:10:00 AM

That sounds good, and thank you very much, Paula.

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/18/2022 12:38:00 PM

Great haiku, Lin! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Lin Lane
Date: 1/19/2022 8:09:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Kim.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/18/2022 11:02:00 AM

Lin, congratulations on your win with this sensory gem illustrating "winter's icy breath." Think I will go get something warm to drink now after experiencing this winter chill! Blessings to you!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/19/2022 8:09:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sam. It does require something hot to drink after reading. lol.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/18/2022 5:26:00 AM

Lovely Haiku and congratulations on your win! :) Paulette

Lin Lane
Date: 1/19/2022 8:09:00 AM

Thanks, Paulette.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/17/2022 4:15:00 PM

I personalize all the seasons because of the same human feelings I can imagine from both. I love your haiku Lin. Blessings xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 1/18/2022 2:39:00 AM

I always appreciate reading your wonderful comments. Thank you, Connie.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2022 12:04:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Lin - A great and cool winter picture :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 1/18/2022 2:38:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, and thank you so much for your sweet comments.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/17/2022 9:06:00 AM

Hi Lin, You described a “ Winter” scene very well. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a great day-Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 1/18/2022 2:38:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Alexis. Hoping you're well.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/17/2022 8:28:00 AM

Lin, congratulations on your silver placement with your splendid poem!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/18/2022 2:38:00 AM

Morning, Tania, and thank you for honoring my Haiku with a placement in your contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2022 12:20:00 PM

i especially love that final line Lin SO descriptive:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/16/2022 12:29:00 PM

Merci, Jan. No snow down south, but a titch chilly today.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/16/2022 10:38:00 AM

I was in Scotland one winter years ago and was amazed to see cars buried in drifts, you discribe it well Lin. Hope you're having an enjoyable weekend. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 1/16/2022 11:25:00 AM

One day I'll make it there. I haven't seen snow since I left Colorado, and that's ok with me. It's chilly here today, but sunny. I'm having a great weekend and hope your day is a bright one.

John Lawless

Date: 1/16/2022 9:34:00 AM

nice description of Winter's frosty kiss

Lin Lane
Date: 1/16/2022 11:24:00 AM

Thanks for leaving your comments, John.