Snowdrift

In the blue edged blade
of winters harsh constraint
on a chair made more severe
by the pale thinned wind alone
it is unclear
whether the bird left first
or the man

Footprints carved like scars
bruise the snow so vividly
that ripples rise
in the watching eyes

Eyes cut by the knife edged wind
linger over the prints pressed in the ground
hesitating
whether to let them fade
At the rim of longing
that will not fall away
there is the wish
for a wildfire gust
to fling them clear
Instead the wind casts its red cord
and binds me

Thinned by winters sullen cold
the chair yearns
for the rusted chatter
of those who once sat there
in warmer seasons

A leaf held to its branch
loosens and lets itself fall
settling upon the remaining prints
a dry cover laid gently
across what still trembles within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 8:51 PM
amazing work, Sun!! in my favs
Daniels Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 4:16 PM
Excellent winter imagery, Sun. I feel the beautiful longing solitude in your articulation. The poem feels light, yet deep with an ethereal quality interspersed with rootedness. I like that you’ve inserted “red cord” into poem. It feels like a holding grace. Apt title, exquisite ending line. Sending Great Love., Ghairo.
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