Snow-Contest

S parkly flakes drifting above,

N ow turned into icy prisms,

O nto hands I place my gloves,

W inter is here with white rhythms.


Written: November 2, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lawless Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 4:46 PM
congrats Laura
Negron Flores Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations Laura.
A  Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Laura, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Callus Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Your white flaked rhythm leads to a worthy victory, Laura! A lovely winter offering:) Congratulations on your top placement! regards // paul
Scars Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Thank you dear friend of mine!!! You're the best! -luloo
A. Sharma Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Very wonderful write Laura.. congrats on great win!
Scars Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Many thanks Dr. Upma! :)-luloo *smiles*
Merryman Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 5:45 PM
I like your acrostic, Laura! I like that it rhymes, too! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Scars Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Thank you Kim!-*smiles* -luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Congratulations on your lovely winning entry Laura. Icy prisms...beautiful!
Scars Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:47 PM
Thank you Connie again for stopping in! :) -lu *smiles*
Lane Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Great rhyme and acrostic, Laura. Congratulations.
Scars Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Thank you Lin :) -lu
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:51 AM
Lovely acrostic congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Thank you Jan, please check your SM..thanks :)-lu
A. Sharma Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 12:07 AM
How lovely Laura .. congrats on awesome win!
A  Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Laura, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT
Scars Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Thanks SKAT :)
Juman Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 7:03 PM
wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think
Deschler Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 5:44 PM
A nice acrostic poem with lovely images of snow... It will not be long before we see those white flakes falling everywhere!... Good luck in the contest, Laura!
Scars Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 8:18 PM
Thank you Kelly :) -LU Be blessed
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