Snowblind Npm

oak leaves flittering
goldfinches heard but not seen~

         sunshine ricochet 



12\30\2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 5:21 PM
I want to see them now; they must be tiny but mighty!
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January 13, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Listen, you will hear them...
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 8:11 AM
The european goldfinch is a highly coloured finch with a bright red face and yellow wing patch. have never seen one for real:-)
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January 5, 2021 at 9:12 PM
Maureen, If I were to tattoo my heart, I would use these words. -Richard
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January 6, 2021 at 10:55 AM
What a lovely thing to say, thank you Richard. I have hearts tattooed for wooed by words, for Leonard Cohen (order of the unified heart, there’s an Irving Layton connection too) warm hugs xomo
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January 5, 2021 at 11:57 AM
Wow that’s a blinder super Mo, I need my shades not a visor, cheers David
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January 6, 2021 at 10:58 AM
I need to get me some ilgaak, the original polarized sunglasses. xomo
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January 4, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Stunning my dearest, Maureen!
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January 4, 2021 at 6:26 PM
Thank you sweet D! xomo
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January 1, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Lovely Mo. just lovely. :) Linda
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January 3, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Thank you Linda! xomo
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January 1, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Such a lovely picturesque scene. Pity no doves around ;) XOVB Happy New Year. ~~
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January 3, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Hugs & Giggles vb! xomo All the best~
Connelly Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 8:48 AM
A great way towards approaching the new year, Maureen. I can truly visualize this image. Thanks.
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January 3, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Thank you Jeff! xomo
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January 1, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Very clever, Maureen -- a terrific haiku! Best wishes for the new year, Carolyn
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January 3, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Carolyn! hugs! xomo
Wolf Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 7:02 PM
Get a goldfinch and watch a ping-pong game with the sun! You are so creative, my friend!! HNY! ~ Boomer Rang
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December 31, 2020 at 10:54 AM
Mahalo for the inclusion! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! Aloha! Rico
Leffanta Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Did you see the Scottish 500-drone synchronised flyby on New Year's Eve? That was quite impressive! Aloha! Rico
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December 31, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Cheers brah, to a change of muse my dear sweet friend! ~x
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December 30, 2020 at 10:21 PM
Love the Haiku, Mo, and the juxtaposition is perfect..All the best for the New Year.
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December 31, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Thank you Harry! Happy New Year warm wishes to you and yours! xomo
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December 30, 2020 at 6:01 PM
Love the image and the last line nails it. Happy New year Tom
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December 31, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Thank you Tom! My muse surprised me with that one ;), Happy New Year blessings to you! xomo
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December 30, 2020 at 5:11 PM
Pretty imagery, Mo!
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December 31, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Thank you Kim! New Year Hugs to you my friend! xomo <3
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 2:13 PM
absolutely gorgeous imagery Mo, not seen a goldfinch in the longest time they are gorgeous birds:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 31, 2020 at 7:55 AM
I don’t know what yours look like, we have American Goldfinches here, they’re a drab brown in the winter, but I know their song! Happiest New Year blessings my friend! xomo <3
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