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Snowbirds

warm sun beckons

nubile bodies lie on white sand shores

     snowbirds

Copyright © Diane Locksley | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 21, 2011 at 12:37 PM

Congratulations on your win Diane in Charles's contest "Haiku Your Way". Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

January 31, 2011 at 5:13 PM

Congratulations to you Diane on this great poem. I see from the comments that you got a big win on it. I can certainly see why. nice hearing from you thanks for your encouraging comment

January 30, 2011 at 12:47 PM

Hi Diane - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the haiku contest. Best wishes, KC

January 29, 2011 at 5:22 PM

Congratulations Diane on your 3rd place win in the contest with this wonderful Haiku----kashinath

January 29, 2011 at 4:50 PM

Congratulations Diane, on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses

January 29, 2011 at 4:06 PM

Good one..Got a laugh..Congratulations..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2011 at 3:41 PM

I remember this gem! a big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

January 29, 2011 at 3:05 PM

Congratulations on your win, Diane! Love, Carolyn

Deirdre Omaidin

January 29, 2011 at 1:17 PM

Great image here. congratulations on 3rd place. Well done, Déirdre

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 29, 2011 at 11:56 AM

Congrats Diane on your winning poem in the Haiku your way contest with this awesome piece ..enjoy with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 29, 2011 at 11:20 AM

This is a very descriptive haiku, Diane :) enjoyed reading this :) Congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)

Carrie Richards

January 29, 2011 at 8:13 AM

I love the unique visual of this one....just lovely, Diane! Congratulations!

Carolyn Devonshire

January 28, 2011 at 2:13 PM

Nice work, Diane. That's how it looks in Florida. Great description of those who flock to the South when winter sets in. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 28, 2011 at 9:37 AM

Beautiful Diane. Enjoyed reading it today. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2011 at 9:00 PM

very interesting, the contrast of sun and white snowbirds!

January 27, 2011 at 6:45 PM

very cute write on the snowbirds with pleasing picture, Diane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 27, 2011 at 5:02 PM

Scenic picture in words painted so beautifully Diane .. good luck in the contest .. with luv..

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