Snowballs Melting Fast

Yesteryear’s child rolled in the snow all flakes blazing in frosted happy crystals
Broke through ice on winter scape lakes and warmed with steaming chocolate
Roasted chestnuts on sticks in the fireplace thawed glowed marvelling joy
Hot molten marshmallows mellowed frost bitten hands soothed adventurous soul
Winters were glorious with immaculate seasons greeting revolving excitement

Nostalgia romantic reminiscence foresight or withering delight’s sadness
Miraculous icicles descending dripping noses silently disappeared
Memories evaporated forgotten glaciers relinquished destroyed
Ravishing blistering heatwaves desertification thirstiness
Aggrandised humanity's perverted ‘advancement’
Tsunamis hell frozen

Conscience obliterated
Snowballs


Written on 07th April 2018 and counting

For ‘A Melting Snowball’ contest
Entered as Free Verse because 
Melting Snowball form is not a Poetry Soup menu
Word count per line from 13 to down to 1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/19/2018 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/20/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you Susan. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 4/18/2018 3:49:00 AM
Congratulations, Kai on your well deserved win.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/20/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Subimal. Many wishes to you, Kai
Date: 4/17/2018 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kai .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/18/2018 3:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve. Many kind wishes, Kai
Date: 4/17/2018 12:08:00 PM
- Best wishes and congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/18/2018 3:42:00 AM
Thank you for your compliment, Kai
Date: 4/17/2018 11:08:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Kai:-) hugs jan xx
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/18/2018 3:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 4/17/2018 10:31:00 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal win with this lovely and lively poem, Kai.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/18/2018 3:43:00 AM
Thank you Line. I appreciate that, Kai
Date: 4/10/2018 2:48:00 PM
Wonderful write. Very creative with fantastic imagery. Enjoyed immensely.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/11/2018 2:13:00 AM
Thank you Frank. And I enjoyed writing this so much. Poetry gives me passion and passion gives me poetry. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 4/8/2018 8:11:00 AM
An awesome interesting nostalgic write for the melting snowball contest Kai; good luck in it!~Che :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/8/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl. I appreciate you reading and liking. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 4/8/2018 8:06:00 AM
This is such a fun write, Kai. It is wild how we are in spring and still snowing in NY and other places... Mother Nature rules! Awesome write and I wish you all the best... Hugs :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/8/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Akkina. Wow, still snowing in New York. All the best to you too, Kai
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